Tuesday, October 12, 2010

The Girl in Black & Maroon - An October Night in Ahmedabad during Navratri

Its Navratri* season, and Garba* is in the air. The night is abuzz with the excitement of people going out for dancing and having fun with friends and family. And its result - this post right in the middle of my exam season! Its based on a fictional setting describing something that happens a LOT all through the nine nights. A guy and a girl meeting while dancing, sometimes talking to each other, and most of the times, just looking at each other and then moving on. Read on..

Part 1 - Karnavati Club, Ahmedabad. (A famous garba location in Ahmedabad)

He had gone to the Club to soak in the Navratri spirit with friends and get a respite from his busy schedule. They were dancing and enjoying themselves, and he too was trying to dance despite having two left feet. He was also trying his hand, actually feet, at the difficult steps that the others were doing, and having fun till...... Wham! He saw her.. The girl in Black & Maroon!! (She was dressed in an outfit that had those colors and since he did not know her name, he decided to call her that.) He had taken a break and was standing with his friends. A few had gone to get something from the refreshments stall. And she walked by from between the circle that they had formed for dancing. She was leading her grandpa to some other part of the ground. At first he didn't realize how beautiful she was until she walked by, and then it started sinking in.. and he was flattened! She was so pretty!! The way she was dressed.. the way she had eye lined her eyes with kohl.. her flawless skin.. without much make up.. and the way she was taking care of her grandpa!!

He told about her to his friend and they headed in the general direction where she had gone without much hope of seeing her again, since the ground was filled with hundreds of people. But, then they reached this part of the ground where a trained group of dancers was dancing amazingly well and doing stunts. They were surrounded by a lot of amazed onlookers, and to his amazement, one of the onlooker was...the Girl in Black & Maroon! She was standing there with her grandpa, and later he noticed that she was joined by her mother. He and his friend watched the dancers for a while, and when it ended, they all headed for the refreshments stalls, including she and her family.

Part 2 - His home.

Later in the night, he lay on his bed thinking about her. He was fast forgetting the way she looked, because he had seen her for only a few times and that was from a substantial distance, except two times, once when he saw her for the first time when she had passed by him, and the second time when their gazes met while they were looking at the trained garba dancers. He didn't want to forget the way she looked, because this incident was playing over and over in his head... because this was the first time that he, Mr. Shy Guy, had seen a girl he had never seen before, and was actually not scared to try and approach her to talk. But sadly, she was with her parents and he couldn't talk to her.

Their gazes met quite a few times.. when he first saw her, later when they were seeing the dancers, and also during the break near the stalls. But then, he saw that her father looked in his general direction, and he freaked out and left. Later as he sat down with his friends, he noticed that she was gone. And then, he saw her again! She was going back to the part of the ground that was meant to be used for dancing.. but it was only a small fleeting glance........

He kept thinking about her and wishing that he should have talked to her somehow... anyhow... He could have tried...

And all he could do was think, and hope that destiny would make them meet again, like it did that day... someday, somewhere.. The Girl in Black and Maroon might pop out of nowhere.. and dazzle him with her smile!

* Navratri is a nine nights' festival, celebrated in India to thank Goddess Shakti (Hindu Mother Goddess) and her various forms, for her blessings. And Garba is a traditional dance form performed during this festival by the revelers.

9 comments:

The Chirping Chick said...

Fingers crossed for your. Hope she bumps into you soon and turns to be THE girl as well. btw, it reminds me of the episode from How I Met Your Mother (about the girl who dresses up as a Pumpkin !!)...

ATB with finding her :)

Netika Lumb said...

fiction??????????????????????????????????????????? hahahahaha ;)

Karan said...

@ Muzik Diva - This is something that happens a lot to many people, which is why i wrote about it. And most probably i too would have been stuck like that as well, had it happened to me!! Fiction, remember?? :) But, has something like this happened to you too??

And i've had HIMYM since a long time with me, but i've not watched it yet. (Gosh, i'm feeling left out!! lol)

Karan said...

@ Netika - badi hasi aa rahi hai??? What is the joke?!

"Its based on a fictional setting describing something that happens a LOT all through the nine nights."

Sukhada Gholba said...

awesome karan !! u write really well :-) i enjoyed reading it :-)..plz keep coming up wid more stuff !!

Ire said...

If it ever happens to you in real life, think of a quick excuse and go talk to the girl! Please do!

Karan said...

@ Sukhada - Thanks a lot! :) Encouraging words like yours make me write more (although I'm not posting much), and I'll try to come out of this writer's block soon. :)

Karan said...

@ Nikita - Lol, I'd love to do that, but the question is HOW! How do I get over the loss of voice, and frozen feet?! :)

Karan said...

I'm sorry for the delay in reply to your comments... I wasn't feeling motivated enough to blog, or even reply to the comments. But, I'm extremely thankful for your comments and views. :)